Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, August 14, 2018
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi there, my name Tanner is and I am a student at
ReplyDeleteOhaeawai Primary School. I really like your solar system about mars..
It made me think about adding more detail.
Have you thought about writing more words in your writing about mars.
If you would like to view my learning, my blog is
https://ostannera.blogspot.com/